"David has an expert eye for literary writing style and possesses command of the English language. He has critiqued several manuscripts of mine, in various genres. He sees my writing from another perspective, and I love his feedback, as it strengthens my stories and polishes them for the submission process."

--- Gayle C. Krause, SCBWI Member,
author of Rock Star Santa and
his Rockin' Reindeer Band
,
published for Scholastic Book Clubs,
December 2008

"I needed a story critiqued and line-edited before submitting it to the Cheerios Spoonfuls of Stories contest. The deadline lurked. But Dave halted my panic. He turned the story around with days to spare. With precise edits and wise suggestions for tension-building." (read full interview)

--- Susan Gray, SCBWI Member,
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Writing Samples

  • Silly-Do Saves the Day: A humorous story of a barnyard cat (Silly-Do) who thinks he's a goat. Unable to convince the other barnyard animals that he's a goat, he finally embraces the fact that he's a cat, saving the cows from a mean gang of rats.
  • Kickball, not Baseball: The story of a young boy who overcomes his shyness in a playground kickball game with the help of a new best friend.

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